The Jacket

Geoffrey is proud of the home he and his late wife, Isabella, created, for themselves and their daughter, Anita. In the ten months since Isabella’s death he’s kept the three promises he made her: he’s kept a close eye on Anita, eaten three meals a day and kept himself ‘respectable’.

Anita, their thirty-five year old daughter, has taken it upon herself to care for her aged father despite his objections to being ‘managed’. Her defence is that she promised her mother to keep an eye on him ‘for his own good’. His objections to this interference in his life are met with a stern, ‘Would you have me break my word to mum?’ Unfortunately, he knows this brooks no contradiction.

Before going to the pub for his weekly game of cribbage, Geoffrey opens his wardrobe to get out his brown corduroy jacket. It’s much older than Anita, but it’s his favourite attire for the pub. It’s not there. He searches the house. There’s no sign of it.

Anita and Geoffrey always have a cuppa on a Wednesday, after she’s hoovered and tidied up. Have you seen my old corduroy jacket, love, I can’t find it? he asks as he pours their tea.
We can’t have you going about looking like an old tramp, can we?
Pardon?
I took it to the Cancer UK shop.
You did what?
You’ve other jackets, dad.
He loves Anita; arguments are always to be avoided.

On Thursday morning, he’s in the charity shop. He laughs at himself as he buys his old jacket for a fiver. 

Looking in the kitchen store cupboard, he sees the cupboard, is tidier, but emptier, than normal. 

Geoffrey calls Anita on her mobile phone, Have you been emptying the store cupboard? 
There were so many ‘best befores’ to get rid of.
‘Best befores’ are not ‘use bys’, Geoffrey objects. There’s a difference.
When are you going to make cakes, dad?
I’m not. 
There you are, Anita says, stifling a sob. They were mum’s. You don’t need cherries and mixed peel. Anita ends the call.

After a Wednesday cuppa, taken, as usual, in the kitchen, but unusually in silence, Geoffrey says, We need to talk, love. What’s wrong? 
Anita puts her head in her hands and sighs deeply. Oh, dad. I miss her. I know you do too. Mum was my best friend. Me a singleton for ever, so there’s just you and me …. You don’t need me, dad.
Of course I do …. 
I don’t think so.
Are you lonely? Geoffrey asks.
Yes.
What about that new boyfriend?
Dumped me.
I’m sorry. Geoffrey hesitates. Uncertainly he asks, Do you want to move back in? As long as you don’t manage me, Anita.
Mum did that, but she was just too clever for you to notice.
Not like you, then? Geoffrey laughs.
I should never have thrown out that jacket.
Wait here.

Geoffrey returns wearing his corduroy jacket.
You tatty old tramp, Anita laughs. How did you do that?


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© Phil Cosker 2022
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8 thoughts on “The Jacket

  1. Ha ha. When I worked in Hemel Hempstead many years ago Eric Morcombe had a leather jacket that he loved. His wife often took it to a charity shop and he always bought it back. Some thought it was his way of making a donation. Others said it was a constant source of irritaion to his wife. Who knows. This just reminded me of that story 🙂 Thanks….I always enjoy my Sunday reads 🙂

  2. In my decrepitude I’ve always thought it was because I’d left my old rags behind somewhere. Maybe I should start asking Sally where things have gone?! Nice story, Phil. It has a comfort to it.

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